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I Have Sinned

Forgive me father for I have sinned.
This taste it lingers on my tongue.
Forgive me father for I have sinned.
I want more.

Do I wrong a right so long ago?
Forgive me father for I have sinned.
This sin it lingers on my fingertips.
Forgive me father for I have sinned.
Wash my hands.

Do I right my wrongs or wrong my rights?
Forgive me father for I have sinned.
I want to do it again and again.
Forgive me father for I have sinned.
Wash my soul.

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  • shadow of the void
    November 8, 2007
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    nice. good use of repetition. this poem is brilliant.


  • Melodies
    August 8, 2007

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    Greatly admiring this poem!

    This poem is brilliant, dear poet! I am so in awe of what you have done here. Line after line of heartfelt agony and pleading. Beautiful!


  • the masked one
    May 6, 2007
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    i think the repetition is really effective, good work!


  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    April 6, 2007

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    This is a great write but "Forgive me father for I have sinned." get very repetitive. I still love you though!

    xoxo,
    Annie

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