One more day is to much to bare
People act as though they don't care
He covers the pain with a broken smile
Hoping to be someone else for a while
He uses makeup as though it's a mask
Happiness in covered by an uneven past
Truth be told he's a little tired
Though by no one he's admired
Sad nights are covered with tears
Ones past on through the years
He wants woken up when the present is changed
Never will he be the same
He hates the ones who cut for attention
Using it as a way to cut through the tension
He wishes to run for away for a while
And hide this pain with a broken smile
A contest entry
- Give me emotion by LaLaLie.
360 points, ended April 14, 2007, 116 entries
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Comments
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i like the rhyme in this. its one of the few rhymes i like because usually i think rhyme sucks... but this poem turned my thinking around..
good job.
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for my purpose: 7
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Very good. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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