Something Red is a rose in full bloom,
Is how I felt when you entered the room,
Is the colour of your lips, is the colour of my heart,
Is where the love does always start
Something orange is a butterfly wing,
One of those inside of me you make dance and swing,
Is the colour of an orange, of the fruits of my love,
Is the colour of the morning, as the sun rises to above.
Something yellow is the bright lit sun,
Is how happy I felt when our relationship began,
Its the colour of the sunshine, of a spring time daffodil,
Its the colour that proves that I love you still
Something green is that jelousy monster inside,
Is something that I found quite hard to hide
Its a colour of determination, to see this through,
So I shall learn to put my trust in you.
Something blue is the calm ocean sea,
Is the strong friendship built between you and me
Love requires friendship, but no one can deny,
There is so much more than friendship between you and I
Something indigo is a colour so bright,
The proves that I love you with all my might
I try, but I can not love you any more,
I love you so much it makes my heart sore.
Something violet can only mean the rainbows end,
But to me you will always be so much more than just a friend,
Although the rainbows time has past,
Our love is here to foerver last.
A contest entry
- love poems (13yrs-18yrs) by Shacadia Shay.
390 points, ended May 3, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is nice. i lyk the way you've used the rainbow to help you write this. good luck in your love life & in my contest.
--blessed be--
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WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!
Wonderful penning! This is such a beautiful poem full of awesome imagery. You mad every colour stand out brilliantly. This really flowed so well and your rhyme is excellent!
All the best to you with this!
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Gaylene
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This is just the most beautiful piece I have read in a long time, well done on this, it made me smile at memories of my own which matched the colours of the rainbow.... gorgeous, hope you don't mind if I bookmark this piece
Karen
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