Wisp of an encounter

I am a thought you never heard,
a face you forgot even before leaving your presence,
Another name, that slips your mind right after we met,
but I am a heart, with love and care you'll never know
if you only see and never listen.

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Lithium

A contest entry

Basically I'm...... by anima bella. 300 points, ended April 4, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Desire
April 2, 2007

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Powerful-

Powerful words in five lines Sweetness
I'm blessed to see, hear and also listen~
to be Touched by Your presence where words do
not have to be spoken

Thank You for sharing Your Talent

Best wishes to You in the contest!
Many blessings too
and my Love~ Desire~*~

penman
April 2, 2007
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Me think AP wife is a tad bias on this one. Thank you sweetheart.

right now

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