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the fly

my my my
how I'd hate to be a fly
and see all my family
by the millions die

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  • Powered by Tofu
    April 3, 2007

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    different... not exactly what I wanted for the contest, it didn't tell much about animal abuse.
    otherwise it was a cute poem, short and sweet, lol! nice write!
    --gooshawn <3 xoxo


  • Little Dark Poet
    April 3, 2007
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    Great Write

    Short but understandable. I miss you a lot buddie, hope to see you around =]