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Two Cheers for Mabry Nelson

I didn't know
how time kills memories
until I saw her
feeling so very much alone
drenched to her shoes
and fighting to remember
the words he once said
"we've got ourselves all wrong"

these are your best years, girl
so keep fighting the good fight
and you'll end up right
you've got to make it on your own
take alook in the mirror
it can't get much clearer
and while laying there dying
you'll wish that you were free

They say time heals
all things but not this one
bruised up and broken
all you can do now is move on
keep looking forward
you can't keep crying for this, no
dry those eyes, girl
you've got this one all wrong

A contest entry

This is a song that my bad does... just got around to posting it. The verse in the middle is the chorus, obviously. =]

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  • mabrynelson
    May 4, 2008
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    wonderful!

    My name is Mabry Nelson. Do I know you?


  • Greson De Winter
    July 30, 2007
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    Love It!

    this rocks my socks off. I loved it! It makes me want to get back on the writing block and foreget all my problems cause "you've got it all wrong." It makes so much sense why worry about the little things when life is still going on? Thanks for sharing this it was wonderful!