To my best friend I will never see again on earth,
Losing you really hurts,
Saying goodbye to you in a casket made me want to die,
It was so unbearable seeing you there where you lie,
But in my heart I knew you were with our dads,
And as I look I see you in the clouds.
Why did you have to leave me?
Why can't death just leave me be?
An angel now full of grace,
and a Best friend left behind full of pain & putting on lace...
Where you hit the tree.
Life is so incomplete now,
Which makes me wonder how,
How am I going to grow up without you...
Thinking of life now makes me blue.
Author notes
This poem is dedicated to Victoria (Vicki) Rena Anderson who died June 3rd 2003 from sustaining critical injuries in a car accident on May 21st 2003. I Miss, Think, & Love her each & everyday... She was the bestest best friend that I have ever had.
Written July 10th, 2003
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300 points, ended April 9, 2004, 56 entries
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sad....i think i will aslo need time i am really in an emotional state of mind and cant think stright now..maybe later but your talent does not go unnoticed
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I just came from a gathering for a friend that passed. I too, will miss my friend as you miss yours. Be glad your friend was in your life and you got to know love and friendship and beauty.
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I cannot say this is pain you will ever completely get over, but it gets easier as time goes on and you let yourself grieve. Whatever you do please do not bottle things in it is honestly the worst thing you can do as the pain lasts for longer so let yoursef cry in freedom and write it helps you express your emotions. (((HUGS)))
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your a beautiful poet...keep it up!
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wow this is really sad but filled with the raw pain of losing a loved one. To lose a best firend is hard probally harder than a family member cause you can tell them you secrets which you can't tell your mother for father.
Great write and read.
luv bunches,
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you almost made me cry again you know i love everything that you write some times i think if it wasn't for the bad things that happen to us in the last years we would not be writing you know i don't think i would but i love you so much good job
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great write i know what its like to lose somebody close i had six people that i knew die in the year 2003. only one of them was over 19. i kills this i know but hang in there and it will all be okay. ~Amber~ -
First of all let me say that I am truely sorry for your lost. I know how it feels to loose someone close to you. I lost my father in 2002. Unfortuntly death leaves a big gaping hole in our lives. It feels as if it will never mend. But believe it or not it does. The hurt and anger never goes away it just gets easier to deal with. I hope that you can find that place where hurt and anger is laying to rest.
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This is such a good write. And so sad.
Good luck and thank you for entering our contest
FifthDove
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your friend will be with you evey day in your heart and on your mind just look at the good times you had.good work
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Excellent
Hey Vicki even I miss you and wish you were here with Sara Dawn so bring Megan and your spirit to surround Sara Dawn from now and forever and give her a sign from a special song to let her know your spirit is still by her side where you belong and help Sara Dawn to continue to be strong.
Amen
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I read this the other night. I thought I noted you, but I guess I didn't. Death seems to come and stay, I know it was like that for me a few years ago. Losing someone hurts, and well you are in my thoughts ~ty
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I'm blue with you Sara Dawn. I think I'll go to a Christian Store Today and St. Monica to light a candle there too. Yes, affirmative this I must do. I'll light a candle for your dad and friends and my loved ones there too. Chrisitan stores and Churches understand if you have tear in your eye.
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This is so sad, but it seems that even in this poem, you have faith that you will be okay someday. It is herd, but you will make it. Mary Anne
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Excellent !
The ones we LOVE are never far from us, Think of it this way, You have several SPECIAL ANGELS looking after you. Blessing you every new day. I admire your courage sweetie. keep on expressing yourself, and NEVER stop writing, In my view , This is YOUR therapy for YOUR soul. {{{ SQUEEZE HUGZ }}} -
I am so sorry.
Vivki would have loved this poem! It is a good tribute, one that will be forever in your heart.
Oh, I am so sorry to hear about your loss. It must be so hard on you. Just know that she is in your heart, she will never leave your side. Keep the memories you had close to you! Whenever you are sad, just think about the happy memories that were shared.
My thoughts go out to you in this time of grief.
Accidents do happen. But there is no need in blaming yourself, if you are. Things happen in life... but just remember, your heart has grown stronger and still is!
Never give up, she is right with you!
With love,
Nelak
(if you ever want to chat, I am here for you!
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Merry Meet My Dear Girl
Darkest Greetings from thy Lord & Lady
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Oh my dear, my heartaches for the pain you are going through. I know the heartache of lost friendships, the feeling of complete emptiness. Yet, dear, Viki will cross your path once more. If you keep her in your heart it will be as if she was standing over you. She is dancing with your soul dear, she is guiding your footsteps.
And one night when you look up at the stars you will see her smiling down on you...
Blessed Be
Morwenna Davina
This was a heartwrenching write dear
May the fairies guide & keep thee
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