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Incandescent

The midnight outside
Is barricaded by these windows.

Incandescent light dissolves the blackness away,
Dissolving my vision of the outside world.

A silent click,
Only heard by those anticipating the sound.

The force field drops,
Darkness floods in,
Revealing the outside world
Bathed in moonlight.

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nothing really, i just wanted some practice.

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  • rozethorn
    April 2, 2007

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    cool!

    this sounds like something i read in a really good book a long time ago. great job! i like this one.


    • MyHiddenSmile
      April 4, 2007
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      aw, thanks!!! i was just practicing since i havent written in a while.