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friends.....


friends...
what a funny word.
it stands for trust,
love,
and yet
it ends up being
betrayal...
hurt
and lies.
they say they'll care,
but
they never ever will.
they say forever,
but they really mean...
till i dont need you anymore.
they learn all your secretes,
then tell them
to everyone....
they will stab you in the back
than
when you turn around,
they'll stab you in the front
watching your face
to see the pain
that they
have caused you.
you begin to trust them
and thats when they hurt you

Author notes

ummm just sum ramblings...pissed off with the world, tierd of being hurt....so yeah

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  • remembering Jo
    May 7, 2007

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    i loved the way you turned arond the cliche of stabbing in the back. very nicly done- and well done i was just telling somone you cant write a poem out of anger- thank you for proving me wrong
    or is it out of dispair?

    well anyways, keep up the good work- although witrh anyluck you wont be getting anymore of that typoe of imspration


    • nobodys-girl
      May 7, 2007
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      thankyou so much for commenting! i don't know if it's anger or dispair anymore, i believe it's anger but im not sure anymore. thankyou again for sure a nice comment!


  • campslack
    April 1, 2007
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    i can truly relate to this. i think that we have all been there. good write.