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i cut and cut

i cut and cut
all day long
cause you daddy
beat my mom
i told you to quit
i got hit
across the face
i ran away
and came home
to find out
i was on my own
a baby on the way
mommy was wasted away
she screamed and kicked
daddy you grabed a stick
i ran upstairs to find my old room
alone in this cold world
i felt like a stone
away again
being shut out
of every home
i had my baby
she is my world
but i can not take care
of her all alone
i needed help
i came home
daddy was at charlies bar
mamma was out
i took her purse to find nothing
but pennies
daddy how i hate
how you ran our family
i went back to using the knife
i cut and cut
all day long
cause daddy
was gonna kill me

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  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    April 2, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    The one great thing about poetry is that it is a way to release the pent up emotions and sometimes you do not even have to truly harm yourself to feel better because writing about it is sufficient. My heart breaks when I read this for I know it must be very very hard for you. I was 18 when I had my son and to this day I do not regret a single moment

    Glad to have you here at AP and please feel free to contact me or any online Greeter if you ever need help here at AP.

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


  • BenziRae
    April 1, 2007
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    sad

    really emotional...
    I dont know what else to say
    Well at least you have your baby
    She must be beautiful
    All of them must
    I wish I could see them...
    God now I sould like a stalker!
    lol
    well, I figured I would keep in touch
    sooooo
    Comment back if you like
    Or whatever
    I wish the best of luck to you and your children
    And only the best

    Abbers