It lights up my life
Cures me when I'm down
Cuts sadness like a knife
With the ability to flip any frown
A feature no soul can overpower
One thing that keeps our situation worthwhile
More beautiful than the most elegant flower
Her ravishing smile
Author notes
About a girl I once knew
Whats Up With That? :)
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Beautiful
I LOVE your poetry, I love all these different styles you go from really urban and modern to classic, it's great and so refreshing.
This was beautiful, it flowed, it was a very classic piece that is beautifully written. I had no favourite part of this I enjoyed the whole thing. I hope you wrote this with a girl in mind, because she's a very lucky girl.
What can I say it's obvious you got talent boy, it's rare I come across a poet where I like every piece, so I'm super happy right now, great write, keep it up, Romanee, xx
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Is all I can really Say. Great write, hope you keep it up and dont qu it over some dumb ass girl.....
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