I gave you it all
Just to see you happy
Two years of giving more
Forgiving all your mistakes
Just to be stabbed
You Betrayed my trust
My heart left chared
You say You want me back
I tell you it got old
"Why?" you say
Now look who gets to be cold
A contest entry
- Pain, Without Love. by La Tua Cantante.
425 points, ended April 13, 2007, 36 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This has happened to me before and its no fun..this poem shows it perfectly how you feel in that situation...you just get tired of it...I think its amazing!! Great write!!
♥ Ashlee
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This is a very true poem. People can be so cold, but it's not so fun when they're the ones who have to go it. Wonderfully written. Good luck in my contest.
-La Tua.
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cold, on cold! now that's...cold!
nice venting and I feel for the ache, though i hope it is one that has mended since. someone can only hurt us so many times...before our heart, too, becomes jaded by such heartless acts.
Rianna
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A very true poem. I like the last line the best because sometimes people dont know that they are doing the same thing that they told you about. Great poem! hope things get better
<3 jenerali
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