Condemned because I like other guys
stricken in wuthering darkness
Lost in coiled catacombs, labyrinths
of darkened dreams, shattered souls
and cleaved conscience
Author notes
You love my fancy alliteration.
A contest entry
- Basically I'm...... by anima bella.
300 points, ended April 4, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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so so so sad, beautiful alliteration and wonderful poem, but just too sad... condemned?!?!? such a cruel world. lots of my friends lived in such a labyrinth before college but things change there..... they found their way out and live became so 'RENT' like minus the lack of jobs and homeless parts lol. Great work, good luck in the contest.. betsy
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Very nice. This surprised me. (But I've already talked with you about that.) Nonetheless, this is a lonely, but strikingly beautiful poem.
~Dead Kennedy Rolls
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frightening image
I think the repeat of consonants gives it a wicked edge...and it cuts...good work!
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baby,
this is so sad.
i love it.
sorry to ask..but are you gay?
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