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Nellie!

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There was a young woman from Thrace,
Who's corsets grew too tight to lace,
Her mother said "Nellie!"
"There's more in yer belly!"
"Then ever went in through yer face!"

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  • Barry Hodges
    March 19

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    Quite amusing, but an excessive use of exclamation marks implies you think it's funnier than it really is.


  • Lanasaur
    February 9
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    HAHAHAHAHA

    so funny it cracked me up well done i love it


  • Myjoy gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    This is funny. I like it, and I know who you are I can tell by the way you write. I liked the line: Who's corsets grew too tight to lace! Ah you think? The picture is well ahhh I am not a mean person so I keep that to myself. Thank you.


  • ThePainter
    April 13, 2007

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    WOW!

    Is this picture real? Wow! Could anyone be that fat??? This is horrible!!! I'd better get back to my training! LOL!!!
    Of course corsets grew too tight to lace!!!

    When I first saw the picture, I was in shock! when this feeling subsided, I started laughing!!! Especially when I read what you wrote there!

    From where on earth did you get this picture? LOL!!!

    Nice try, Keith! At least, you made me laugh.

    Nataly


  • Jalalbad gold member
    April 2, 2007
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    Hahaha!

    Speaking of photos, this one is really pretty.
    The poem is great. Hope you win!


  • WriteOrWrong597
    April 2, 2007

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    I like the last line! I love the word "face" for some reason...Anyway, a lot of exclamation points...lol Nice picture, too. Thank you for entering and good luck.

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