Feeling Empty inside ; in need of a coffee filled stomach
and a tangible dream. Starved for a kind of perfection you only
see on movie screens and magazines.
I'm over and under the skys' limit ; every fucking color of the rainbow
over exposed in twenty degree weather and
I can't seem to breathe any more than
you can be honest.
So I guess we're both a loss.
Author notes
eight lines.
Still don't know if this is what you wanted?
Just;;
random thinking.
which i guess isn't so random if you know how to read between the lines.
thanks babe for letting me enter another one.
♥ Aj
A contest entry
- Basically I'm...... by anima bella.
300 points, ended April 4, 2007, 28 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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short, but as effective and great as every other one of your poems. lovelovelove your writing. its amazing. seriously.
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I can't seem to breathe any more than
you can be honest.
So I guess we're both a loss.
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Darling, dont ever question your work.. I can see why this won gold, IT is just fucking marvelous. you blow my mind, all the time.. Im drunk off of your effect, and this hangover is Just what I wanted... Gawd Daymn dollie, If I could stil find all the socks youve knocked off, You wouldve knocked them off again!
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this is gorgeous, darling. i love these lines. i don't even know what else to say b/c this is so fucking great.society's bites
xoxo,
lys
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"I'm over and under the skys' limit ; every fucking color of the rainbow
over exposed in twenty degree weather and
I can't seem to breathe any more than
you can be honest.
So I guess we're both a loss."
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"I'm over and under the skys' limit ; every fucking color of the rainbow
over exposed in twenty degree weather and
I can't seem to breathe any more than
you can be honest."
Wow, I've really been lacking with comments lately.
I'm sorry doll;; I definitely forgot what I was missing.♥
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your welcome babydoll.
i love this one alot. -
I like the two liner middle ... ugh, how much does it freaking apply to me right now? I've never been at a point in my life though where I've strived perfection ... luckily, I suppose. I do, however, feel emply more than 90% of the time.
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