There once was a man named Larry his brothers name was Gary.
One day Gary and Larry were going to a fancy dinner party but to Larry's dismay he was out of belts!!
So in frantic hurry Gary grabbed Larry his wifes thong he said "you can use this no one will notice and nothing will go wrong!!
Larry nervously said ok, so off they went down the way to the fancy dinner party.
The party was great they both had much fun untill Larry too many drinks, or maybe just one.
Larry was drunk so without will he pulled of his pants with a frantic shrill!!
Then the hall went silent and everyone starred at the ground.
What sat on the marble was all too very wrong.
Because on the marble sat a black silk thong.
A contest entry
- Randomness Personified by Onionducks.
1250 points, ended April 18, 2007, 5 entries
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500 points, ended January 5, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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The flow was a bit weird as said before, but it is funny nonetheless.
Good Luck.
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funny
I love to read humourus poetry and i enjoyed this one, well done -
hahahahaha, a silk thong? no way. This poem was awesome, offbeat, but awesome
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The flow on this was somewhat awkward, and it could have done with a bit more punctuation here and there... but...
It made me laugh! I like your imagination! This is a very inventive write, well done! Thankyou for entering!
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