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My First

I walk into his room
Already knowing what is going to happen
I sit down on his bed
He slips in some music
We talk but not for long
I think to myself
Wow my moment is coming
My heart beats so loud I think he hears it
He leans in to kiss me
His lips so soft how I love them
He  moves down my neck
I get nerves now
He tells me I am beautiful
I smile
He removes my shirt
Then my pants
He asks if I want to go on
I say yes
He lays me down gentle
He starts kissing me passionatly
O how Ive waited for this moment
He slips in gentle trying not to hert me
I make a small sound
I tell him not to stop
He goes on
Moving back and forth
How the feeling is incredible
The sweat glissened off my body as we switch places
He starts to bounce up and down
I start to go faster
With great emotion he flips back down
He goes harder and this splended feeling runs through my body
He says we are done
I light a cigarette
In amazment how it felt
My body numb
I tell him it was great
He smiled at me
We went for another round

Author notes

This was my first time and it was amazing I couldnt believe that this is what I was missing out on.LOL

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  • Soulful Woman silver member
    April 1, 2007

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    Im glad that your first time was a good experience. Some people have awful first times and they never get over it. This was a nice piece..
    Soulful Woman