My soft voice is carried by the wind.
My hazel eyes are shown in the moon.
My dirty fingernails are dug deep in my pockets.
My sleepy eyes sink in deep my sockets.
Author notes
lithium
A contest entry
- Basically I'm...... by anima bella.
300 points, ended April 4, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow... thats a down sort of a day.. i wish you well in the contest and hope you can get some sleep soon
cheers
jen -
A very lovely quatrain, pure and simple and poetic. A
delight o read. Best of luck in the contest.
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i think the images shown, show the best side of a painter's mind the way the picture forms and turns, the eyes following the reader - almost hauntingly. blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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very good.
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