She's just your everyday,
average teenage girl.
Material things don't matter.
All she wants is love...
and she's hoping it wants her too
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lithium
A contest entry
- Basically I'm...... by anima bella.
300 points, ended April 4, 2007, 28 entries
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pretty simple
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Nice work it gets any girl across perfectly.
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Thanks!
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What a sweet and lovely write....wouldn't it be great if it were all that simple. I love it!!
Wyatt xoxox
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great job
This is really good, great job! -
So swept is the average within the winds of hope. Soaring weightless no more or less gradually climbing that slope. For in the end the hope is all that is needed at all, the faith within the vessel.
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nice
i can totally put my self in that place it is amazing!
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Pretty cool, thanks for commenting on my piece this is good.
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