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DayDreamer

I'm a day dreamer
who doesn't do anything but think
no chances, no risks
all is fair in dreaming and reality.

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lithium

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  • sheeprus
    April 7, 2007

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    I understand

    I have not comments on your poem except I understand what you are writing about. By thinking about things, you can imagine in your head events however you are not really doing it in real life so there is no risks invovled, no rejection. I like how you were able to convey this in 4 lines. Good job!