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Regarding Rhapsodizer (Alliteration in Wittian Acrostic)

Rhyme regal
Expressions Eagle
Giving generously: glittering, golden gifts
Apparitions, allusions, averring associations adrift
Redeeming
Dreaming
Inspired imagination, impressive invocation
Notations nearing nonpareil narration
Gifted glossy gregariousness

Reinvest residual redress
Heavens harps hasten
Acknowledge anthems amen
Perceptive presence; persistent poet
Symphonic soulful serenade submit
Orchestral
Delectable
Indescribable intelligence imparted in ink
Zephyr zoom zanily, zenith: zinc
Expressions Eagle
Rhymes regal

Author notes

Yes, these words have all been carefully selected, with much anguish. If the way I have used them in this is unclear, my pardon, as this was in truth a difficult piece to complete.

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  • Onionducks
    February 4
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    I forgot.. this was my attempt at your challenge... such as it is...
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/5022345


  • Onionducks
    February 4

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    Wow... yes i'll accept that as a great challenge meeter. But the next one i think you'll have to write from scratch... as I've been a bit more specific.
    This was alliteration at its fantasticalness!! Thankyou!


  • Old Doc Wit
    May 14, 2008
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    simply outstanding!


  • HerbalGoat
    April 15, 2007

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    Very well done. I am very pleased. All three forms that you have chosen to use are done perfectly. I think the way you used your words was anything but unclear.

    The only thing I do suggest is that you choose a different background. Even with the words highlighted, it's hard to read...

    Thanks so much for continuing our journey.


    • Lady-Pegasus
      April 15, 2007
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      What is funny, my friend is that I had been working on chaning the BG, somewhat when u left this comment, hehe as I was not happy with it as originbally done as well. Thanx for the great contest, and look forward to the next one, on the way there now Oh and tanx for the purty shiny


  • -Ink Artist-
    April 14, 2007

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    Alliteration mania here, Lady Peg! Especially the Z words! It's great to see that this poetic device interests you. It's my favorite one! Great work hun!


    ~Lori


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    April 2, 2007

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    this was yet another great write..you amaze me you are very talented and use really big words and none of your work so far is cliche at all..I really like the background that you choose to use..keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest

    ~Chrissy~


  • earthstar
    April 1, 2007

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    Wow

    It done so very well. It blows ones socks off their feet. Great job I could not of wrote it this well. There cheers for you. I wish I could learn this it hard for me. I can appreciate you stuggle with the challenge you write like a duck to the water


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    April 1, 2007

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    I love the aliteration. It flows well and it is entertaining to read. Good luck to you in the contest. Anythging you write is super duper.


    • Lady-Pegasus
      April 1, 2007
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      thanks my friend, this one was certainly a struggle. I did a lot of thinking and playing and rearranging to do this, heehee. Twas fun though, you know me, I gotta add a twist or three to anything I try.


  • sublimewriter
    April 1, 2007

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    onamonapea

    it was complexed and forced when i read it, but i realized it was in onamonapea and i like it when poets try to use the same letter to write something. i had to read it a few times.. then i realized that the first letters spells out a message and that was clever. did you use a thesaurus when you were writing this poem? you have a good vocabulary. it's been a while since i read someone using the word "zenith."


    • Lady-Pegasus
      April 1, 2007
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      LOL, no thesaurus, although I did scramble to get all the words for the allitertion needed, hehe and did use dictionary.com to verify a few spellings, but then I do that fairly often any way.hehe you used one of my favorite words as well, onomatopoeia. I snap crackle and pop at it, hehe.

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