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Mother Made Me a New Lady, Lazered me a New Dress to Wear, Mother Made Me

In a state, leopard print confusion, location a locust, opaque diversion
Mother Teresa as my mirror mirror on the wall
My pearl purse smile, her fur of coated sarcasm, the white teeth, sleazy eyes
I see her, she sees me, my Mother faking Teresa
I smash the glass, for the sake of battery acid to slave
Say I want a momma, no memorial of maintenance - can't hold a hallucinatory gold shaved embroidery
A close rush of look before I see the rouge cheek, paling
My heart breaks, its not the glass smashing, body boutique
She tears off her skin, tells me to take it, to wear it
Be my daughter she were to say before she shadowed away - she said to wear her each and every day - girl said maybe, just maybe...

Author notes

Mother and Daughter situation, this young girl is a trademark of her mother. Her mother's pushy, she urges her to turn into an animal of a woman, she wants evil in her daughter, their relation is based on crave and opposite wanting. The daughter wants a normal mum but what normal daughter wouldn't follow her mothers rules, what girl wouldn't do what her mum told her to do. There's a force of characteristic in this piece and the daughters received the gift of the twisted. She can accept this keepsake or be a failure to her mother. She's stuck on choice and has to either turn it down or wear it/her with a crown

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    April 2, 2007
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    Doesn't exactly leave me wanting more.

    Thanks for the entry.