Doctor Doctor ^scapel^ please!
{ohmyghawd} I'm "begging" on my s*h*a*t*t*e*r*e*d knees
No sir I don't want a *pretty* p.l.a.s.t.i.c face
or a "new" out fit of LEATHER and lace.
Oh how do I ever st.st.start?
I guess what I want is a ^n/i/p t/u/c/k^ &heart;
My veins glows green like dollar bill$
From f!lthy men with T.W.I.S.T.E.D will$
Can you make to traces of those n@aty l0st loves?
Dye it p*i*n*k like my old fishnet gloves?
"Of course I can complete your dream.
All I want is to hear you scream."
Okay. COME on! HuRRy!
I'll get you up in a nice HAWT fury.
O.O.Oh my doctor that was *fun*
Now my half of the deal is d&heart;ne
It's your turn,
f!x my &heart; broken and worn
Where are you going?
Come back SLUT!
you d!d'nt p@y up
You did'nt fiw me you filthy mutt!
Please tell me what you think
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wow
pretty awesome
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you know jeffree star? if so, you just reminded me of him with this poem. I l<3ve it! rock the fuck on!
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umm,it's good,kinda weird but weird is good,it flows so naturally.
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wow deep i like it alot and if i had the smiley dudes i would give them to you i love your poem its freakin awesome
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this is fabulous bbydoll....its dirrty and gritty and I absolutely love it! Great write hunny......loved it!
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mmmm, yummy write kid!
i loved the way it flowed together!
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Nice
Really really beautiful. I love the imagery and how it makes sense. =) Could you give me tips on how to write dirty pretty? Thanks.
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it started out good.
but at the end i kinda lost it...
so lets consentrate in the start
the storyline is fantastic.
i love the plastic surgery of the heart
wonderful
cookies&&[love]
~{ I N T I M A T E }~
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