I am waiting
you are still not here
I am left wondering
Where you are
Thoughts becoming blurry
nothing crystal clear
A raging frustration clinging
to what is real and unreal
Not being able to distinguish
the differences
Feeling a significant loss
that is emptying my belief system
Your words filled my days and nights
Your presence filled my heart
Promises not kept, breaking down
into fragments of what we wanted
trying to see if they can be turned into
something tangible
Decisions being second guessed
where once choices were solid
They now scourer the depths of soul searching
knowing that trials come with each new step in life
You took my hand to guide me
somewhere, some place it slipped away
leaving us both floating aimlessly
Speak to me, even from a distance, I will hear you
Tell me what clouds your thinking
What fears you have that are preventing you
from experiencing our time
Time will stand still until you are here
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Beautiful words from a soulful woman...
This reminded me so much of my first love, a girl that I met in high school, and how we would write letters back and forth every day while I was in the Navy. Time really felt like it stood still when we were apart at that point in our lives. We're both married to different people today, but it's a time for us both that we treasure to this day.
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TOUCHING AND TENDER!
Space cannot come between two hearts that are meant to be one. Time does not make it fade away but helps it to grow stronger.
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Painfully aware of this feeling and the depth of it reaching your soul...the unknowing is the hardest part, maybe, I dunno, I have had these thoughts myself lately..just keep your hopes high and know that there is a great destiny mapped out for you...We will wait at the harbor for our "yacht" to come in, in the meantime we will laugh & love together...for now, heres zzzz to you!
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Beautiful Sadness
God inside I feel like crying. Right now, this poem is relating to something that I feel. I'm going through a bump in my relationship and this is what it feels like...it's what I feel like. I really enjoyed this. As much as I want to cry now, just because it reaches my emotions, I applaud this piece. I loved it.
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This is just purely sad. I can relate so well to the feeling && it's... it's a sad feeling, not knowing when you'll see someone next or when they're going to come && if they'll ever be there...
This poem though, it is absolutely beautiful. It says much more than is shown in the picture.
A wonderful write.
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Gosh.. this seems so hopeless until the end.. when you wait for the love to come back home. Good write. Deep feelings played out well with your words. I like this. Blessings. Debby
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Wow
This is a great poem. I totally understand it to.
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The last line gies the feeling of hope in this, it is a beautiful piece with good flow and I love the senitments youhae shared. Love, C
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Very in-depth and lovely in it's wording. It says so much. A lot of great feeling in this also. Love the last line....time will stand still until you are here.
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I like everything about this write, but this stands out the most to me:
"Speak to me, even from a distance, I will hear you
Tell me what clouds your thinking
What fears you have that are preventing you
from experiencing our time"
There's so much in this stanza that makes me think. "Speak to me, even from a distance, I will hear you..."
This line alone will be echoing through my mind for a long time. Thanks Noreen for putting this into words. I sometimes think that you know what I need to see most, then put it here for me to read and think about. Thank you for that
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