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Easy Girls Love Things Like This

They say only good girls get to Heaven.
I believe that isn't true,
because all of the suffering that has passed through me,
I've found Heaven standing here with you.
Broken and torn.
Scarred and bruised.

Somehow I can love again,

despite the past abuse.

So hold on to me tight,

don't ever let me go.

I love you oh so much,

you could'nt begin to know.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Aquamarine.
    April 24, 2007

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    'Broken and torn.
    Scarred and bruised.

    Somehow I can love again,

    despite the past abuse.'

    this is my favorite part i love this poem it is freakin awesome


  • Shantalina
    April 20, 2007

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    wow bbydoll...i'm sorry for the crap you've been through. You write about it well though. ILY and keep writing!

    Xx


  • xshotxinxthexheartx
    April 15, 2007

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    i like the title...but i would've used it for something totally different...i use titles that are poetic in themselves and they have nothing to do with the poem...but that's me...the poem however is great..

    xshotx


  • Heartless Angel
    April 3, 2007
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    Oh, burn. But hey, you know what? Who hasn't had feelings like this. This poem is raw and biting and rich and throbbing with life ( that sounded really wrong but if you can get the jist of it, in Lilliese it means I liked this poem.) Obviously strong emotions went into this. Keep up the biting work.

    -Lillian Madeline, translator of Lilliese