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Morning My Dear Sunshine.

Morning my dear sunshine.
You're a million miles away.
But I cant wait to see you
in only seventeen days.
You see so far,
but you're my star.
Yes you are.
Morning my dear sunshine.
Finally everything is going right.
After years of wanting to hold you,
I get to nice and tight.
To you my love,
like a dove.
My gift from above.
Morning my dear sunshine.
I can barely think straight.
My whole surronds you
and I can't bare to wait
to see you.
Yes it's true.
Morning my dear sunshine.
I love you

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  • Thunder Child
    May 16, 2008

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    wow lol it was weird for me to read this only because by bestfriend calls me sunshine, but other than that it was an awesome write


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    January 7, 2008
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    Cute...it put a smile to my face....and yes,it has the rhythm of that song too =]


  • Aquamarine.
    April 24, 2007

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    aww this is sweet i like it alot i llike the last two lines the best i hope your 'special someone' loves you too

  • tasha-lasha
    April 1, 2007
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    AWESOME

    OMG!!!
    I love this !!!!!!!!!!!
    ily, Amy !!!!