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Love's Pain

"Just another emo,"
One may say.
I guess it's true
No one cares anyway

The ones who care
Are not here
The ones who love me
Cannot be near

But true in love I have to stay
Even when we three are locked away

One in a land of sun and fire
Scorching weather from that burning blaze
Stuffed in a tiny room
But not hidden from the Guardian's gaze

The other trapped in the Northern lands
Though in safe company, being alone
He cannot stand.

And the third, in the home she was born
in the valley of cloud, rain, and storm.

Apart we stay
For this time anyway
Until the 12-month wheel spins four times
Alone we shall be, until the distant bell chimes

Whoever said love has no pain
Never truly was in love
Never felt the sorrow in their heart
And spent a night crying under the moon above

Love tears up your heart
Splatters your soul under your flesh

You break
And shake
Go blind with stinging waters
In your bloody weary eyes

The pain of love is ours to bear
For those who will not live
alone in despair

We ache because we love
And we love because we are loved
I shall suffer til the end of my days
For I am in love!

And that love will stay
Even after my memory
is cast away

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  • TragicFlaw
    April 9, 2007

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    i can usually write a clear well thought out response... but... the title of the poem captured me just as much as the words you wrote. they aren't mine... but my heart aches for them. all i can say is i agree whole heartidly... Whoever said love has no pain
    Never truly was in love
    Never felt the sorrow in their heart
    And spent a night crying under the moon above


    God bless....


  • Robert Rumery
    April 1, 2007
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    Wow..

    That's powerful! WOW!!! I love it!