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Abstinence

Waite till marriage, it's what God wants us to do
If you Waite than to your spouse you will be more true.

Virginity is important; it's how he wants us to be
If someone is pushing you than say "do not tempt me!"

It is God's will that we Waite, but if you do it before your time
There are those who consider it a crime.

God will forgive you, and he will help you resist if you pray
Pray for him to help you, each and every day.

Just hold on, you'll be better for it, you'll see
Because if you Waite till marriage, happy you will be.

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  • RuLives4GodOnly
    April 2, 2007

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    Very nice! This piece speaks a lot of truth that America needs to hear! With unwanted teenage pregnancies and so many STDs, the world seems live a corrupt place. Your message is very clear, I applaud you, dear poet!


    • Elvenfairy
      April 2, 2007
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      the world IS a corrupt place, in many ways. Good luck with your contest! Hope it helps!


  • Snakehips Pete
    April 1, 2007

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    Great poem! I am laughing with great glee at this one! Especially your unique spelling of Waite!!!!!! Keep on penning, you will go on my favourites as I love irony and satire!