Blinking eye
Lose lip smile
Freeing your sigh
For just a while
Whisper wind
Pitter rain
The cheshire grin
Of the insane
Missing thought
Lost your mind
What you had sought
You cannot find
So just smile
Face the day
It's worth your while
Let come what may
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Haha! A delightful touch of insanity. EMbrace the insanity of life yes!!! As I read this I had Monty Python going on in my head amo!
*sings*
"Always look on the bright side of life!"
*tries to whistle but can't*
"PPFFFFSSSFFFFTTTHHHPPPFFTT"
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This poem is pretty awesome. I like the nice flow it has to it.
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So just smile
Face the day
It's worth your while
Let come what may
golden advice, i mean really, keep it flowing this is just good -
Wow, haven't read a poem from you in a while! This was excellent; my favorite part was:
So just smile
Face the day
It's worth your while
Let come what may
Cassie
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ALICE
great job i loved the 2nd stanza
Whisper wind pitter rain the cheshire grin of the insane
that was funny
great job
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Alice? Thank you glad you liked it
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alice, yea alice in wonder land cheshire cat
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ah! haha, gotcha!
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