Guepard's silent walking
Gallons of pure nectar
Glory of the one sun
Gaze of simplicity
Grasping boundless spaces
God's shining clarity
Grace, lord of endless love
A contest entry
- Pleiades Picture Competition II by ShelleyA.
1040 points, ended April 7, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Grace is indeed the pure essence of simplicity,
it is through grace that we are able to grow.
this is very lovely and profound
God bless...
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gracious
yes, thank you for your kind commentary. it's true, grace is that which remains when i am not. God bless...
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Excellent
you have expressed maximum maning in minimum words
Hemant -
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thank you, dear dr hemant, for your kind appreciation and support. hope you are well. we stay in touch.
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Hi jean-marc. Excellent revision to line 6. Gives nice flow to the piece. Thanks so much for participating in our contest. I appreciate it.
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jean-marc,
Thank you for entering your poem into this contest, it was well written with a unique perspective.
Dennis
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thank you, denis, for your kind note and support. yes, you are really right, all perspectives are unique.
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Good title. Near perfect form. Thoughtful. Good flow and tone. Nice imagery. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice rhythm. Good word choice. Nice alliteration and assonance. Uplifting. Your poem suits the picture for which it was written. My one observation is that line 6 is 5 syllables and should be 6 syllables. Other than that, this is a fine write. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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thank you!
thanks a lot, shelley, for your thoughtful insight and commentary. i will try to improve the line 6.
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