I am the one
who haunts your imagination.
One look at me,
you are drawn into
my dark, enchanted world.
When you encounter me
you will spiral under
the immortality I promise.
I am dexterous,
engaging your mind
in a mysterious fog
pledging to unravel
its mysteries
Take care,
I will hoodwink you,
just to ensnare your soul
into my lustful depths.
I have known terror and agony
and will inflict my revenge
on any who enter my web
of deception.
My reality you crave,
my eyes beseech,
you slide into
my darkness...
Author notes
OPTION 4
A contest entry
- Picture contest lots of options by Mingan Tzar Avarus.
425 points, ended April 17, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I din't like this one as I did some of the others, thank you for your entry however. ~Corey~
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What an amazing write dark and beautiful, a powerful take on the picture and wonderful choice of words, well done.
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the dark within all of us, the temptations all around us and deceitful promises of wrong. It is a dark write as well compared to what I am used to from you , but it is excellently done [eerie almost]< sp? Best wishes and much love
xoxoxo
reenie
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Thank your for your entry and good luck.
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Big surprise, but I like this... I think you've really captured the essence of the character captured in the photograph. Great vocabulary use, and great imagery. Zach
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Wow
This is really cool,its dark and beautiful.
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