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Womb Of Mother Earth

Womb of mother earth
Nurtures tiny seeds of life-
Giant trees unborn.

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  • sassylilpoet silver member
    May 10, 2007

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    Such a powerful statement you have made with so few words and the title, Womb Of Mother Earth is perfect.


  • Nyla
    April 17, 2007

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    Salaam Apee,

    This is a very creative work. So short, so simple yet your verses stir us to reflection.....I really like the way you convey such weighty ideas in Haikus....Few of us have the power of suffusing mighty thoughts in such scarce words...Truly speaking, there might be many good poets on AP but where Haiku is concerned, my Apee is the master of all, Masha Allah....On coming to AP after a long, long time, it feels double more good to read your verses again. Best wishes for my sister in the contest and in everything you are doing these days.



  • SarahD
    April 1, 2007

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    I loved this! Thought it was well described wit good use of metaphors! Thanks so much for entering and good luck!
    Sarah xx


  • Andi. gold member
    April 1, 2007
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    such serene words!
    well done
    luv coop