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Short and Bittersweet?

Curry Favour? Dodgy Flavour.
Enjoy yourself and your environment,
It`s where you ARE, that counts...
So many things to say to you,
Before we go apart,
So many things I hope you know,
Feelings that I try to show.
You bring the sun and with it fun,
To drench myself, fresh-faced
In the comfort of a warming place.
In life`s simple pleasures I find solace,
Moments bathed in happiness.
Remembrance issues forth an acid tear,
A companion for my mortal fear.

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  • mantis180
    April 1, 2007
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    Acid Tear... I like that... I dont know, it just jumped out at me and I like it. Very good descriptiveness of this piece. I like it. You have a thing about the being in the moment dont you? "Where we are" and all that. I like it. Good write, well done.

    -Ash