I love the way you smile,
Without pretense, no mask, simply you.
Looking at your eyes, I see them as windows without curtains
Because they are open and clear
As if to say, “You may look at my soul for I have nothing to hide,”
And if your eyes are the windows to your soul,
Then your mouth is its doorway, Especially when we kiss,
And how I feel when I’m close to you,
Easy and natural, just plain me, the real me.
There’s no need for me to put on or try to be something I’m not,
For when I’m with you, I feel like a person, not a thing,
And I see you as a person, and a woman,
Comely, concerned, loving and so very much alive.
Sometimes, I see the “LITTLE GIRL” in you,
Especially when you cry or feel lonely or afraid.
When you are like this, I want to be by your side
And put my arms around you,
And say, “Honey, I don’t know why you are crying,
But, hold me and let me comfort you.”
As I brush a curl of hair from your face,
And softly kiss away your tears,
You put your arms around me and squeeze me tightly,
Without a word,
I know why I love you the way I do.
Please tell me what you think
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Unconditional love shines all the way through your stellar poem,Jeff..What woman would not want this treatment of dignity and love...This is a precious write...and deserving of my bookmark!
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My boyfriend just read it with me, put his arms around me, held me, bookmarked the page, and told me that he really liked this poem. If you can put into words what my boyfriend can say with his touch and his eyes, then you have a great poem. Thank you for it.
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I would kill for a guy to write such a beautiful poem about me! This is one of the first I've read by you and I've already fallen hard for your sensual words and beautiful wording! Can't wait to see some others by you!
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I love this poem, its so beautiful. I really like these lines:
Easy and natural, just plain me, the real me.
There’s no need for me to put on or try to be something I’m not,
For when I’m with you, I feel like a person, not a thing,
Someday I hope to have this kind of love. this poems gives me new hope.
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If you keep giving me these kinds of comments, I may fall in love with you. I write romantic poetry as a guide on how I should feel and be in love and relationships. I really try to be in what I write about.
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Very nice...some men run when they see tears, it's good to know some don't...a big part in understanding women...lol...
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WONDERFULLY SWEET
This is the sweetest one yet...I could just see the love for someone special in your words, so soft and caring~~~Without a word,I know why I love you the way I do.
thank you so much for sharing your beautiful words
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Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!
Oh Jeff, this one is such a delight to read. So sweet and romantic, my favorite type poem. You write them so well and full of tender feelings. I think I know where you get your inspiration.
She is one lucky lady. I am happy for both of you. You take care and keep smiling my friend. Bless you, Sandy 
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as always..
The title is the catcher, a first empression stands out the most...
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Thank you for the comments.
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A lucky woman you wrote this for..A heartfelt feel good work. I enjoyed yhis very much. You must be a romantic man! Good job. Kelly
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I can describe this in two words: Simply Beautiful.
This is not overly elaborate, and written with level vocabulary -- excellent. I love the simplicity, and I love the beauty... a great combination. -Zach
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Thank you Zach for your kind comments. May I ask, why do you cry? You might enjoy my poem, "All Men are Little Boys." Jeff
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