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Wampyr

he was named in demon breath and fire revealed
his nature hidden behind a lycan smile
with eyes as black as the abyss that called
through fluted night and omens cast
while souls abroad he lusted; for that was his truest desire
heatbeats that pulsed with the darkest of red wine
his obsession
this prince of darkness named
of voivode bone and marrow declared
in the court of luxemburg he flourished
intention bound to thirsts extreme
as courtesan and maiden alike fell beneath his steely gaze
and offered body and soul to slake his undying thirst
breasts bared in homage to the darkest realm ruled by night
a lovers kiss to pearly moist lips parted
and shadowed embrace beneath his exquisite spell
'neath gibbous moon
on stony beds and dampened earth
with each thrusting stroke of hips co-joined
he slakes his thirst at leisure
revelling in their languid moans
of insatiable want and sudden death
thusly named: Vladimir Mihnea cel Rău
dragon breath be his heritage
and fate for centuries unaccounted
so wampyr cursed
eternity and more...


Author notes

option vampire - a total fabrication out of my own dark, shadowy mind...
qwerty

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  • Dryad Enya
    June 25

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    I-O-U

    no it's not some weird staement it's because i must depart now and will leave you a coment when i return again later today or tomorow


  • Knight70 silver member
    June 23

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    excellent vampyre piece.....

    Congratulations on the bronze with this stunning write! I love to read vampire pieces, so this was a real treat today. Thank you. Your use of creative imagery and language are excellent. Best of luck to you in this contest.

    Don


  • Devilish Temptation
    August 5, 2008

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    wowowowowow blew me away fantastically written very well done I enjoyed reading it so much sorry for the contest and me not commenting sooner I am have been ill


  • borrowing.moonlight gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    wow... your vocabulary is extensive, you seem to weave words like silk. this is really good, i like it. thanks for entering


  • Blood666
    April 13, 2008
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    I like the poem but its not the Vampire test I'm looking for sorry


  • crystallynnbradford
    November 19, 2007

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    i believe it it suposed to be VAMPRIE unless you did WAMPIRE on purpose...beautiful imagery and very nice flow...loved how you added in the "lycan smile" thanks for entering and good luck in the contest


  • vampireblood
    May 7, 2007

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    Very nicely done, I found this rather interesting. I also like the way you wrote the poem. Great Job. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
    ~~~Vampy~~~


  • CountCrimsonAvarus gold member
    April 1, 2007

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    Well this kind of goes against all vampyre poems but its half vampyre so ill let it slide but this would be a great entry in a hybrid contest i might host one of those to eventually good luck

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