How do I get on with my life
without you by my side
we were together forever
or was that just a lie
Was your love ever real,
Tell me now, what did you feel
I didn't think I could love
I didn't think I could feel
but, loving you was easy
I realized I loved you from the start
I felt things for you,
I thought I was incapable of
you will always have the key to my heart
Please unlock the door,
so I can let someone in.
Please show me the way
of how to love again.
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Written July 10th, 2003
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Time is the key the unhooks the look. It hurts, we suffer, times moves on, we get over it. Then someone new comes along and the dance starts anew.
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In this poem it made me feel the way you probably felt when writing it. very good!
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Cartwheels
A touching and passion filled write
the words fit the reading easy to follow
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Brought a lump to the old throat this piece, I am understanding completely how you are feeling here. When a love is taken away its the hardest thing to let go. But you are looking forward more than looking backwards here, you know there is more for you and you are at least recognising the fact that you have and indeed want to move on. Great piece! A whole host of images , memories and thoughts all inside this. My admiration to you!
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You shall love for love is all,
The very stars above you call,
Come out, come out, and love again,
All your joy shall gather when,
Your heart becomes a happy shout,
For love is what its all about.
You were beloved, meant to sing,
Your love shall be a wonderous thing.
all good
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love this one 2!! i can relate to your poems really well!! please keep writin them, n feel free to c if u can relate o mine aswell, although i generally write mine with a joke attached to it!!
well dun xxxxxxxxxx -
Another beautifully written piece of poetry! Keep it up although not that I have to tell you that!
Nice job! *sonya*
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more of your poems.. i love this one.. i see it from a few different pints i see it as someone who just had a break up with someone that they felt they could never fall out of love iwth and is still holding on to that person in more ways then memories.. and i also see it as someone sho needs to be let go, someone who is in a relationship, and is lost and confused, and doesnt feel they are where they want to be.. and needs to be set free.. beautiful topis and write i loved it ~nikki
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i love this poem... its really great! your stuff is really good & i cant wait to read more of it!!
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This is beautiful and painful........you are the one that hold the key that will set you free of this person......It is hard but.....
unlock the door.......lisa anne -
Sweet! This was great. Loving is hard to do when you dont love yourself. Good writing here!!!!
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Terrific write. It is absolutely grand. The "Open the door" part... all too familiar with that in the past. Very good write.
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wonderful poem...the only way to get over a guy is in time...hope that times passes by quickly....-wild*child
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This is so sad, but I understand exactly how this feels. To love in such a way that you know it is forever, but somehow it falls away leaving you standing there feeling empty. Love is forever, so why does it always seem to end.
Beautifully expressed.
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i love this...it's hard to love again after a breakup...this shows how much you might still love someone after a breakup but the need for new love...this is pretty
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