A teenage boy;
Angered;
From the stress and hatred from others;
Now asleep in the coffin;
Of which is to be buried.
The funeral;
Had the coffin there;
Surrounded by vases;
Vases of flowers;
Vases of which people give to him;
To show love for him;
But why are they giving them now;
When it's already too late.
All of those vases;
All of those flowers;
To show love;
When the love can not be recieved.
Author notes
This is just something that i always thought was something that needed to be drawn to people's attentions.
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this was such a sad write and it so heartbreakingly true..its a bad and evil world out there..this was a great write..powerful and emotional keep writting your very talented
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i've always wondered that myself. we spend all kinds of money on flowers for people who arnt around any more. i guess its tradition....great poem and thankyou for entering!
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A powerful message..... it's so easy to want to love someone after they're gone.... why can't we show them love when they are here? Brilliant piece. Thanks for the entry in my contest.
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this was a good write...i can relate to this and found this to be a sad poem..your words were very strong, powerful and emotional as well..you are a great author keep writting and good luck in the contest
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why thank you crystal. lmao.
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How Tragic
i love this so much even though it makes me sad. Jake ill give u a vase of flowers cuz i love you! hahahaha! -
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So much truth in that tragedy. Where were the flowers when the eyes were still open? Wonderful write and thanks for sharing it. -
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thank you.
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