I see you everyday and hold back my tears.
I just smile like everything is okay.
But everything isn't okay.
I want to cry all the time.
Maybe then I could feel better.
maybe then I could smile inside again.
Everytime I see you, you either ignore me or look away.
I don't want just sex.
I want a relationship with only you.
Please come to me.
Can't you see how I love you so?
Everyone says you're not worth my time.
But my heart tells me different.
Sometimes I wonder what you would say if I told you how I feel.
But it's too hard to think about you turning me away.
You said you are ready to settle down.
Why not with me?
I'm good enough to fuck.
Why don't you think any higher of me?
I guess I am stuck still wishing.
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This was good. I feel your pain. Thank you for entering I wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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Wow!
Everything I see you, you either ignore me or look away. <--Every time?
This poem is GREAT it shows your emotions and how you feel and think, it says everything that is on your mind, and you don't hold back! Perfect.
That's it-perfect;
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damn, son...
i love the emotion you release in this piece. Even though i am a guy, i have felt that way SO many friggin times in my life, it aint even funny. Yes, ladies; not all of us men are dogs. We want happiness, too. anyways, i need to figure something out: who are you, my dear? lol
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Wow this brought me to tears. I know almost exactly everything you said. At the start, I was going to copy in the part that related most to me, but, well, I'd have copied most of the poem. I'm sorry to hear you are going through this. It must be really tough. Good luck in the contest.
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that is a tough situation to be in. this was a great poem it could have flowed a tiny bit better than it did but it is still great.
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mm. bad sitiation. very well written except in a few places it could hae been worded better. but reall good job. thanks for the entry.
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Whoa... a very emotional write, I really like how this piece picks up in intensity...."I'm good enough to fuck", wow.... very raw and powerful. Thank you for the entry in my contest.
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this was a great write and i can relate to parts of this.your words were very strong and powerful and i enjoy reading this poem...keep writting your very talented and good luck in the contest
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Wow intense. Especially "I'm good enough to fuck". but I really like "Everyone says you're not worth my time. But my heart tells me different." I loved that. Such memories can be brought. Lovely job ma'dear. Thank you for entering, and goodluck
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