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The War Inside

Watch the light slither out of the sky -
flags fly frayed in the weary dusk -
The sky is as ancient as I feel -
A weathered sentry, watching, watching from stone turrets
made from a heart,
draw a weapon,
for even in the darkness,
the legions advance.

Grasping for sustenance
but nothing except a longing
for a day when the siege will no longer be
something about war
  breaks naivete like youth encased in glass
when the poems have dried, along with joy,

and I know I have lost something...
when the darkness beckons - the monsters never halt
the onslaught -
I want to dive deep and let it slip
-- but courage is to stand fierce
and never let the desolation invade-
the world, once an imperfect dream -
become a frayed illusion...
and here I must stand,
until the sky crumbles.

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  • maria
    May 9, 2007

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    Hello. How are you? Hope all is well with you. As always I enjoy your poems and the way you convey your feelings through words. The poem ends on a pessimistic note, and yet what transpires is courage and dignity. Well done.
    Regards,
    Maria


    • Mountain of Light
      May 21, 2007
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      Maria, thank you. I hope this finds you well. I appreciate your thoughtful words, as always.