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first impressions

And you wonder what they say about
the girl whose dancing to the music in her head...
    "Shes too fat to be a model
    too young to be a mother
    too thin to be a lover
    too weak to pull her weight
    too strong to be graceful
    too tall to see what life is worth
    too short to touch the stars."

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  • CarCrashHumor
    July 30, 2007
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    hmm, well I think this is really neat,
    but it doesn't grab me with strong hands.

  • Kom
    July 18, 2007
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    Five Stars

    Excellent.
    Should be a Joanie Mitchell song.


  • Poetry of Life
    July 18, 2007

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    This is absolutely stunning. Truely heart stopping. You are an amazing poet, and an amazing person.


  • petrichor
    June 7, 2007
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    I love it. It really speaks the truth. about everything really.

    WOAH.

    <33


  • Paper.Moon
    April 10, 2007
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    i love it

    this is awesome...I agree with Anna


    [this is kelso btw...had to get a new account]


  • technicolour reject
    April 1, 2007
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    i think you're PERFECT! you know I<3 you so much.


  • sweetpearl
    April 1, 2007

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    Oh there's definitely some truth here. No matter how we are, someone always thinks we're not good enough for whatever it is that's floating inside their fantasyland. But we are what we make it. If you want it - go and get it. I like this.

  • serpentscroll
    April 1, 2007
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    good poem, it seems to be reflexive, and has true meaning beneath the words,

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