I call her Sunshine
For she brightens up my day
She warms my heart
Makes blue skies out of gray
She’s a shining star
She always makes me smile
It hurts my heart
When I don’t see her for awhile
I call her Sunshine
She brings a smile upon my face
She’s such a beauty
Makes my heart begin to race
There is no other
That could begin to compare
So warm and gentle
A gem special and rare
I call her Sunshine
For she makes the songbirds sing
I do so love her
To me, she’s everything
I’ve got to tell her
How she fills my heart
I need her with me
And never shall we part
A contest entry
- it's time again! by Greson De Winter.
600 points, ended June 21, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love your title for this piece and
the words that goes along with it is
so lovely. Excellent flow, it's almost
like a song.
Very enjoyable.
Good luck in the contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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This is such an uplifting and happy poem
I really like the way you have written and presented this - wonderful writing I love the beautiful honesty and dedication of your words.
Keep writing
Polly
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Great form on this piece and just beautifully done. It has a light, happy note to it and that's wonderful
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