swirling around me
these noises don't stop
darkness surrounds me
and my eardrums pop
my hearts on fire
and in my ears
I hear the desire
to kill off my fears
CHORUS STARTS:
stop whispering
in my ear
stop whispering
your all that I hear
stop whispering
get out of my head
stop whispering
just let me forget
:CHORUS ENDS
darkness ensnares me
and I feel the pain
of hate that dares me
to do the same
I feel the anger
and I can't help it
addicted to danger
and I can't quit
CHORUS ONE TIME
pump the music
cover up my ears
try to block it
and all of my fears
I don't need them
they just slow me down
but here they come
pushing me to the ground
stop- whispering
stop- whispering
CHORUS ONE TIME
I can feel your honesty
and it eats me away
but I need to break free
and ignore what you say
I don't need you
as much as you thought
I hope this gets through
the pain that you've brought
stop- whispering
stop- whispering
CHORUS Two Times
Author notes
This is in a way my song about Gaara of the Desert from the hit anime show Naruto( MY FAVE!!!!!) Gaara is my fave of the charictors and he happens to be the one with a troubled past- hmn, like I don't do that alot!! lol!!
much luv~
shadowed
A contest entry
- Dark and Depressing...Please enter by XHollowXEyesX.
700 points, ended April 6, 2007, 119 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful lyrics. Very good beat. It has great hatred and anger with a passionate sense of longing. Great job. Thank you for sharing.
Always pen from the heart and you shall never write wrong.
~SongByrd
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fellow Otaku
As another Anime fan, I am glad to see some anime inspired poetry. I seen Naruto and this poem deffinately carries that vibe of the series. This flow was excellent the lyrical content of this was great. I can see this being the next Anime theme song. You got any favorite J-pop singers?
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thanx!!
woot!! you're the first person who's read this who has had even a slight idea what naruto is!!!! thanyou for your comment!! anime rox!
much luv~
shadowed
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wow. I have absolutley no idea what this anime show is or what it is based upon, as I hate anime(my POV,no offense), but this is truly a great write.it flowed so naturally with so much meaning and sadness.
great work
thanks for entering and goodlcuk -
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Thankyou for enjoying it!!( no offense taken at all!!!!!!!!!)
muhc luv~
shadowed
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You did a great job with these lyrics.. good flow, excellent form.. sad and painful emotions expressed well. Good job. debby
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I have no idea what show this is from..however I do enjoy your lyrics very much..
well done..
thank you for sharing
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Thankyou!
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I like this, alot.
I actually smiled through this.
Which is retarted if you think about what the poems of.
but, I kept getting the thought of the boy I love whispering in my head all day.
Which, even with a broken heart,
I doubt I could resist.
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Do not know any of these characters or the show you mention, but did think you had great lyrics here. Easy to read and understand, good beat and rhyme in these lines. Liked the chorus .
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