you laced
nihilism
through the air, threading moon
up -- under proverbial trees
the comedy of clouds
a bird's eye view
from where
he made
photography
-- the bullets through apples
negatives pale under pressure
frame polaroid thought like
perforated
smiles.
Author notes
narcissus at oasis
a bunch of cinquains linked together and fluctuating.
"i do not suffer fools gladly" -- makes me think of exaggeration of the press and thus, yellow journalism.
contest entry
A contest entry
- If You Have Me On Your Favorites by Cupcrazy.
475 points, ended April 4, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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300 points, ended April 14, 2007, 33 entries
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Honorable mention
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An entry that I'd never would have expected from you...but this is awesome. Loved it.
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I'm excited.. Oh yeah and this was a really good poem, again. I have this contest going on.. Teen Idol.
I think you could do very well in it.
Why didn't I ever see or read any of your poems before?
You're really good!
I'll be sending you a link in a minute.
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Great form to use - worked well in this setting. Very metaphoric and meaningful. Congrats on taking gold in this contest.
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Amazing, I love your train of thought. Descriptions are simply out of this world.
"nihilism" - what a powerful word
DancingRed.
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Outstanding!
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