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Down and Out

Have you ever felt down?
Maybe blue
or out there maybe?

Have you ever felt like you could hit a wall so hard that it might just shatter beneath your strength?
Did you ever think that anything was possible...
What about impossible?

What would you do if everything just came crashing down?
Maybe scream?
Cry?
Hit something?
Go insane?

Were you ever embraced by someone you hated?
Embraced by someone you wanted to let go?
Embraced by a never ending leash of hatred?
Embraced by something so none existent that it seemed real?

Were you ever out there with no hope?
No ones shoulder to lean on?
No one there to comfort you when the world just came crashing down?
Or maybe you were just there staring out into space high as anything being taken in by a big black whole hoping it would all end soon?

Please tell me what you think

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  • writersdespair621
    May 31, 2007
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    Wow, i have felt all of those things and i think many other people have also. great job and i love the intimidating questions.
    love you
    WD


  • Amber Lee
    March 31, 2007
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    This is powerful,good write.