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Those Words Remain Unspoken

In a time, in a place
Where silence was serene
Whispered thoughts, all I hear
A visionary's dream

The ticking sweep of the hands
Each moment, blissful sweet
Filled inside with all I need
Found within my heart's own beat

With fading light, the time has come
And nothing else has mattered
To take away serenity
A dream that has been shattered

From that day until infinity
A heart left torn and broken
Yet still to wait so silently
For those words remain unspoken

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  • Keith Drew gold member
    April 9, 2007
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    mmm?

    Where have I heard that first line before lol
    And its time lady you had a hug!
    Come on now end the storm inside!
    And just be the beautiful heart I know is within you.
    You can't hide from me you know.
    You can't hide from anyone hiding behind your dark clouds.
    Hey the sun is shining! Can feel it?


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      April 9, 2007
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      Thank you Keith. Nope, can't hide from you,you seem to read everything I write as if I spoke it to you personally. Just dwelling on some thoughts, some good, some sad. But you're right, the sun is shining. (Well, actualy it's raining here today, lol, but I got the hint)

      Storm

  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 1, 2007

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    Oh Storm. This is a beautiful,
    but sad! A very touching and
    personal write. You have so
    much to give, with your wonderful
    heart and spirit, your wisdom
    and counsel beyond measure.
    Hang in there

    Jeannie


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      April 1, 2007
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      Thanks sweetie, I'm hanging in. Your words touch me so very much hun.


      Storm