I stood by your side
Held your hand
Offered everything to you
Everything that I am
I cared about you
And you threw it in my face
A wound that won't heal
A typo that can't be erased
I gave you the best part of me
And it was all I ever really had
I thought giving it to you was right
I didn't think it would turn out this bad
From the beginning
I knew it would end
We had too much in common
You were too good of a friend
I tried to hold on
Wanted so hard to believe
That love was out there
Out there for someone like me
You said you loved me
And then in the same breath
"I never loved you"
I shall carry those words to my death
Author notes
Sooooooo.... yeah.
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Hmm, I can not seem to enterorut, or spell for that matter. I reallly like this and I can really relate. OH MY GOSHNESS, i NEED TO GO PUT A POEM ONLINE.
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I realy like the line about the typo that can't be erased. I feel that that parallel comparason really adds to the feeling of this poem. I'd like to add as well, that you should kick 'em all in the nuts. It doesn't matter who, just kick 'em in the nuts...
Hell Angel
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