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Straight

The pencil is exploding
with thoughts, fantasies, dreams.
Complete and raw
emotion
spills onto
the college-ruled page.

Straight from my mind.

Writing
is wonderous.

what needs changing, and what do you like?

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  • ForgottenMemories
    October 31, 2007

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    omg I looovvveee this! it says everything about poetry in a very simple way, and yet it's extroadinary!
    omg though... like WOAH!
    LOL.
    Sleep-N

  • Captain Mindiferd
    April 6, 2007
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    yay! someone who finally sums up what poetry is all about! awesome job, molls!


  • madgirlslovesong
    April 5, 2007
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    you're right! it is!

  • Shahoodeh
    April 4, 2007

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    Amazing!!

    God I miss how it feels to write...feel so disconnected from it...maybe my emotions are starting to dull...sighhh..


  • leo2
    April 3, 2007

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    I love the background and the thoughts were simple yet elegantly expressed.

    Regards,
    Leo Long
    ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.


  • nichtmich silver member
    April 1, 2007

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    Adorable

    Thank you, pepperminty! You have really summed up what poetry is all about and why we are addicted to this little pastime. Your last sentence says it all. Best wishes to you Poet and keep up the good work!

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