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I’m Back

We met,
We loved,
We had…

You left,
You cheated,
You hurt me.

Night Fall.

I’m gone.
Can’t come back.

I went to sleep.
I had a dream.
It was dark.
I cried.

Light.
The sun; dried my tears.
You left.
I was happy.

Day Break.

I’m awake.
You’re gone.
I’m back.

Please tell me what you think

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  • XxLiVeYoUrLiFexX
    April 3, 2007
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    Great

    The ... is very suggestive =P good job with this one!