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A touch of love

Scorpio child, of passion and power,
with ambition growing like a flower.


Moon child, of nurturing love,
a beauty sent from the gods above.


Deep desires and fearless emotion,
running deep within the ocean,
where loneliness can hide,
as tears flow with the tide.


A powerful connection to embrace,
returns a light to her faded face,
lift's her high with romance,
they but only took a glance.


He adores her, clear in his eyes,
when they're together love does rise,
a longing, passionate, a loving gaze,
not seeing the love through the haze.


It is clear, their desired connection,
two souls with a loving reflection,
feelings of love left unspoken,
as slowly their hearts where broken.


The love goddess touched their hearts,
their unknown desire now imparts,
passion seems to fade the distance,
using all power in their resistance.


Scorpio child denies the touch of love,
Moon child hides passion she dreams of.

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  • even angelz cry
    June 9, 2007
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    hi

    loved it


  • Flossy
    April 29, 2007

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    It is very different. You don't speak about hard facts, but instead go beyond. I love how you seemed to catch the essence of their love and not just their love. Love is many things, but you got past the surface of it with this one.


  • shutter-bug
    April 28, 2007

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    this is a very sweet poem, but it also has some sadness mixed in it too. you did a good job writing about both emotions without one over powering the other. this is a very nice piece of work. thank you for entering!


  • Autodidact
    April 13, 2007
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    greatness

    Oh my god I thought you couldn't write able love this amazing write some please


  • LoveLikePoetry
    March 31, 2007

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    i really like this. bravo. expecially "He adores her, clear in his eyes, when they're together love does rise,"

    anf good luck in the contests


  • Xero-Cool
    March 31, 2007

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    tthis is very beautifull great write this is the bes tpoem ive read today good luck in the contest..


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    March 31, 2007
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    Thankyou for your lovely entry, Bella

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