What a foolish little girl you are
Thinking that you know who you are
Foolish for seeking someone to love you
For thinking that he cared about you
Stupid! Why that?
Was it because you thought he needed you?
Fickle and easily tricked - desiring to be abused
Your sanity slowly slips away
Causing you to smoke and drink
You keep getting worse every day
You are searching for that celestial plane
NIRVANA is what he said
As play by play goes over again
Inside of your head
What a coward you have been
You haven't even confronted him
Why in the first place did you even want him
Sparks, sexual attraction
The moment your eyes met
You could feel your pussy getting wet
Perhaps he could just sense it...
You got what you needed
What you wanted and dreamed of
Your sex drive was growing
You just need a piece of action
Your moan echoed through the air
He placed his hand over your mouth
Like anyone could hear
Nipples erect from the cold
It was perfect -
But somehow pathetic
Pathetic like you are now
Caring what he thinks
Weither he will want you again
Why does the human need emotions
If only you could be like him
And have no attachment
You will be connected
Until you discover a new sensual
Sexual attraction
And you try to hold back
The repitition of what happened
Sex..
is good
Sex is great
But fantasies are fake
Erotica to the extreme
As we continue on wishing
Meditation, soothing dreams
A contest entry
- WOW Me 2 by Lactar Wolfgang.
425 points, ended April 1, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show Me your Muse by perfect relief.
550 points, ended April 7, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In love or lust? by Myjoy.
450 points, ended April 3, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, i'm new to the Buddhist philosophy, but any self-respecting Buddhist wouldn't go around abusing someone else's vulnerability, then again he's only human and horny like most people, or perhaps just has a different interpretation of Buddhist Philosophy. . . who knows! Your poem though is drawing and i hope it doesn't taint your attitudes about this great practice.
I enjoyed this piece b/c it wasn't TOO angsty, but still got the age-old issue brought to the light of day in away that is understandable and easy to relate to.
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Well done, I really liked this idea of lusts fight with wanting to be loved. Well said. Good luck in the contest.
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thank you
thank you so much for your comment. Thank you for the luck. I based this on real life so hopefully things get better.. the said thing is that i still talk to him
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wow u somehow described me! i like trhis alot the background too the font was hard to see but i could make it out... nice write!
PrettyxImperfection
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thanks
I'm glad i was able to pull you in with this poem and catch a little bit of you thats what each poet tries to do when they write. This is based on real life and looking at your profile and can really relate to you. We need to talk more sometime.
<3 Mandi
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lovely. packed full of emotion. i have a friend that should read this and take it to heart. you've done a spectacular job!
however, there is one thing that i require of you...and that is your muse. place it in the author's notes and i will be eternally grateful to you. please hurry to do this as it is a requirement specified in the rules. ( if this is to or about someone you so not have to name them specifically if you don't want to).
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well unfortunatley i couldn't get to this in time for the author's notes..It's about a guy who i met at work who had alot in common with me liked all the same music and same authors etc he was like a clone of me minus the fact that he was buddhist and i was unsure of my religion at the time (and still kind of am) So we knew each other for a few weeks and lo and behold he ended up having sex with me and now i am slightly upset at the fact that he is with a different girl every weekend =/ so yea I wish that i would have thought before i did.. but basically its about the human mind and how we thrive for sexual activity.. haha and thanks for taking this into consideration and I hope that your friend will read this =D
<3 MAndi
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i really like this poem it is diffrent and a new twist on normal erotica. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for entering the contest
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thank you
thank you for taking the time to read my poem.. It is from the heart as most of my poetry is. With this I hope that others take the time to listen and take in what i have to say
=D Thank you again
<3 MAndi
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This is different!
But I liked it! I never thought of this type of poem being written! Very good! You wowed me a bit with this, good job!!! A very interesting topic to write about, I wonder where you go the idea... good luck in the contests!!! (By the way, I also suggest you change the font color, most contest holders won't even give this a chance since it is a color on a background that you have to highlight the text to be able to read it! >.< You may want to change that.
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thank you
Thank you for telling me your insight. I love to write and this came from my heart. unfortunatley it was based on a real life event so I hope that with writing others will take into consideration what has happened and much more.. Thank you again for taking the time to comment on my poem. Feel free to look at any other of my works =D
<3 Mandi
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